Shipwreck

This is something I wrote some years ago. I originally wrote it in spanish (as it is my mother tongue). And now I came with the idea of doing an english translation, being this the result.

I have to say that it is slightly different from the original spanish version. And it might still look a bit odd. Be it because my current english level is not that good to write poetry. Or because I do suck at writing poetry regardless of the language.

So I would really appreciate any comments, but please try not to be rude!

Here's the original version, btw (in spanish): [link]

Good day to you all!